On the final day of activities before the Symposium, we all come together for critical review day. I went all out and booked in for 4 mainly with tutors I had already worked with either on FMP or any other the other modules.
Wendy and Stella:
It was this review where one of the images that I wasn’t sure of where it fit was removed from the selection and I carried this decision on through the rest of the day.
Whilst I really like this image as it feels to me exactly how both my mental illness and my physical disease have affected me socially, I understand that it does not fit with the rest of my images. It also means I have an even number of 16 in my final project after its removal.
It was also suggested that I remove the titles and also the boarders and if I can change my mount board to black.
In terms of my diary entries I could consider a handout or a zine.
Jesse and Cemre:
Again they agreed that the titles are not needed.
I need to consider how I use my diary entries – I should perhaps try the Sophie Calle – Hotel Room layout.
Watch Velvet Buzzsaw on Netflox
I should perhaps shorten some of my diary entries and simplify them.
- Look at the work of Hamish Fulton
I also did a google search on walking artists and will research these also
I will also research:
Read the book: The Synthesis of Photography and Text in Contemporary Art
Consider printing on Aluminium or Selenium prints.
Paul and Karen:
Agreed with many on the comments above.
Consider Audio at my exhibition – me reading out my diary entries.
Open Skies – Don McCullin
Steph and Michelle:
Look at Sam Taylor-Johnson – 5 revolutionary seconds
Observance – Nicola Dove.
The links of these are to show movement with imagery and also Dove uses audio in this project.